Poetry (Post Poems That You Created Here)

[Fate Lingod]

I figured that I would start a thread where members can come and share poems or even maybe songs that they had made. I don't ride poetry, but Miroku does and when it comes to showing people his works he doesn't like too. So I figured to get this started I would post one of his poems (He's gonna be so mad ;D). It's actually one of my favorites. It's called 'Loves Kills'


Sometimes I ask myself, "Why even bother?"
When it just goes in one ear and right out the other.
Out on a limb, not a ledge, no matter what they may say.
No pleasure, just pain that we cause day after day.

Love kills and it hurts me to treat you this way.
Love kills and it hurts me to see you this way.

Each day we rise like the sun in our rooms.
Hatred and violence is what leads us to our doom.
There's no real peace just false hope causing more confusion.
Hatred is knocking at the door and he brought his friend, Destruction.


I'm gonna try and get Miroku to share some more of his poems, but maybe this time he'll post them . Feel free to comment and post your own works.

[Sven Cal Bayan]

Confession

there is a girl, i long to be, but i am certain if she wants me.
her smile and her giggles makes me wiggle.
we fought side by side against those who oppose us.
what better team we against those before us.
i am not certain if i am still with hikaru a.k.a. milliaria.
but stellar (reina) if you are reading this i want you.
you make my face red as the hue.
because baby, i like you.
what better time to spend at the beach
so i can look over and give you a reach.
i am just a soldier that kills
you are an extended that enjoys the thrill.
we make a great team you and i.
so i think it's time to give us a try.

NOTE: I don't do poems, but Stellar, that one is for you.

[Stellar Loussier]

svencalbayan said:

Confession

there is a girl, i long to be, but i am certain if she wants me.
her smile and her giggles makes me wiggle.
we fought side by side against those who oppose us.
what better team we against those before us.
i am not certain if i am still with hikaru a.k.a. milliaria.
but stellar (reina) if you are reading this i want you.
you make my face red as the hue.
because baby, i like you.
what better time to spend at the beach
so i can look over and give you a reach.
i am just a soldier that kills
you are an extended that enjoys the thrill.
we make a great team you and i.
so i think it's time to give us a try.

NOTE: I don't do poems, but Stellar, that one is for you.

Aw you're so sweet. My answer is YES!!! ;D

[Miroku Angelo]

svencalbayan said:

Confession

there is a girl, i long to be, but i am certain if she wants me.
her smile and her giggles makes me wiggle.
we fought side by side against those who oppose us.
what better team we against those before us.
i am not certain if i am still with hikaru a.k.a. milliaria.
but stellar (reina) if you are reading this i want you.
you make my face red as the hue.
because baby, i like you.
what better time to spend at the beach
so i can look over and give you a reach.
i am just a soldier that kills
you are an extended that enjoys the thrill.
we make a great team you and i.
so i think it's time to give us a try.

NOTE: I don't do poems, but Stellar, that one is for you.

That's awesome bro. I think you should reconsider and start doing poems. ;D

Well, this is one I wrote a long time ago about one of my relationship with one of my 'old' friends.

"Letting Go"

I saw a vision of you today...
And I don't treat everyone and everything this way.
I had a memory of you today...
And I want do anything to make you feel betrayed.
I was thinking back today...
And I remember everything like all the things we used to say.
I thought I was over you today...
But now I dug up everything sometimes the true is too hard to face.

Cant find the time to look inside...
And realize that I can't hide.
I can't be myself unless you're there.
This situation is so unfair.
I look at you and tell myself...
that you're with me and no one else.
Everyone has problems and need help...
But it seems first I must help myself

I will be, I will show.
Follow me wherever I go.

You're the sunlight on my face.
And you're the one I can't replace.
And everything's falling apart without a trace.
But that was so long ago.
You assume that I've forgotten.
But how could I ever forget you?
I know I'm having trouble letting go...
Though it was so long ago.

[Star Leonhart]

You two both have talent. Who are you talking aboutin the poem Miroku?

[Sakura Hatashi]

stellarloussier said:

svencalbayan said:

Confession

there is a girl, i long to be, but i am certain if she wants me.
her smile and her giggles makes me wiggle.
we fought side by side against those who oppose us.
what better team we against those before us.
i am not certain if i am still with hikaru a.k.a. milliaria.
but stellar (reina) if you are reading this i want you.
you make my face red as the hue.
because baby, i like you.
what better time to spend at the beach
so i can look over and give you a reach.
i am just a soldier that kills
you are an extended that enjoys the thrill.
we make a great team you and i.
so i think it's time to give us a try.

NOTE: I don't do poems, but Stellar, that one is for you.

Aw you're so sweet. My answer is YES!!! ;D

That is so cute. Who would have thought Sven and Stellar. Fate, Miroku, and Sven all have talent.